Remade/Remodeled (stardust savant)
08/12/03 07:57 PM
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There's something quite resonant in her smile, he decides It could make the sun black It could make the night white There's something quite resonant in her smile, he decides Which means he thinks it's fine
There's something quite sonorous in her voice, he decides It could make the birds flat It could make the symphony trite There's something quite sonorous in her voice, he decides Which means he thinks it's fine
There's something quite invigorating in her manner, he decides It could make the dull sharp It could make the stones try There's something quite invigorating in her manner, he decides Which means he thinks it's fine
There's something quite loathsome in his person, she decides He could make the milk curdle He could make the children cry There's something quite loathsome in his person, she decides Of course she doesn't think it's fine
I know that I must do what's right Sure as Kilimanjaro rises like an Everest Above the Serengeti
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Remade/Remodeled (stardust savant)
08/14/03 01:50 AM
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Cracks of white appeared in the grey 'Perhaps this will be better' But in the end it's still the same Because the white, it pervades And the white is just another shade of grey And in the end, we're still the same We're still waiting,
Shards of light appear through the haze 'Perhaps our hope has come' But in the end, nothing has changed Because the light, it pervades And the light is just another kind of haze And in the end, nothing's changed We're still wanting,
And the white fades to grey And the light becomes haze In the end it's the same In the end,
nothing's changed
I know that I must do what's right Sure as Kilimanjaro rises like an Everest Above the Serengeti
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Remade/Remodeled (stardust savant)
09/07/03 05:26 PM
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A month A week A day An hour A minute A second
but never a moment at all.
But seriously folks...
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vintagerock24 (wild eyed peoploid)
09/07/03 07:29 PM
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I like the last one !
T.ReX☼BowiE
"Ride a white swan like the people of the Beltane.." Thank you very much. We love you. Bye Bye.
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Remade/Remodeled (stardust savant)
09/08/03 05:10 PM
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Times like this when the rain comes hard and I'm locked in my room there's nothing much to do except try to work out when I fell in love with you wait... I'm in love with you?
Times like these when life slows down and I'm stuck in the same places always seeing the same faces I stop and think that I'm in love with you wait... I'm in love with you?
Times like then When everything seems so much better and everyone smiles all the time It's hard to imagine I wasn't in love with you wait...
I'm in love with you?
But seriously folks...
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Remade/Remodeled (stardust savant)
10/07/03 08:18 PM
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Bet you didn't see that coming
But seriously folks...
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beatled (cracked actor)
10/07/03 08:23 PM
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jim nabors is way cool
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vintagerock24 (electric tomato)
10/07/03 08:25 PM
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I had to look at that for a few minutes to actually get it, yeah I'm slow .
T.ReX☼BowiE
Well if it's hers, then it must be mine. It's a ripoff...
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beatled (cracked actor)
10/07/03 09:25 PM
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he said anything would do.
so she took his hand and they walked and walked until they came to a lake hidden by trees and vines and leaves. it was sparkling. the moon sparkled and the fireflies sparkled and it was surreal.
they drank the water out of the flowers that had been rained on. he said anything would do.
she smiled. she always smiled when she talked to him. when she thought of him. and she was happy, and she hoped that he was happy, because it made her even more so.
it wasn't really awkward, as they expected it would be. they swam in the lake until it got too cold, not really talking much, but both smiling largely to themselves.
and she thought, it could happen.
jim nabors is way cool
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kellyjean (electric tomato)
10/08/03 10:14 AM
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I never knew you wrote such great stuff. I should spend more time in Artiste Forum, you can find a lot of great stuff in here. If my opinion means something to you, then I'd like to say I like over half of your poems very much
It's a way of dealing with all the feeling Keep believeing in dreams ...these are the dreams of an impossible princess...
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