I think you'll be the same

But I have no idea
Sitting here waiting for you to fall or cry or...
Feel anything at all

You're still the same
But

Everything else has changed

Cry 'Havoc!' and let slip the dogs of war

i...like...your poem.

i thought it was a bird, but it was just a paper bag ...

and...I...love it to pieces

Biased towards odd/pale/creepy/dead/fictional guys.

This is a clear proof how marijuana can harm your mind.

"Learning to cope with feelings aroused in me
My hands in the soil, buried inside of myself
My love wears forbidden colours
My life believes in you once again..."

This is good. Real good. Would you mind if I made you my next featured poet on my little site at:
Distant Disco
http://www.distant-disco.freeservers.com

I need to change it soon and I think it would be fun to use your poem!

"All the world is made of faith,
And trust,
And pixie dust."-Jonatha Brooke

Save the everyday fan: BOYCOTT BOWIENET!

You need to work on your imagery/power words

I...heart...you

little brother

hysterical and useless

It's all insane
It's all the same

It's all we think
It's all we were
It's all we felt inside

It's all I had
It's all I've lost
It's all I ever dreamed

It's all you know
It's all you hate
It's all you wish was dead

It's all me
It's always me

It's all that's on my mind
It's all you left behind


It's all the same



It's all insane

I'm a people person... who drinks

Edited by Remade/Remodeled on 03/26/03 08:30 PM (server time).

Ooo wowie. That is very good. Methinks it needs an extra something at the end to make the rhythm work properly, though.

That Vulcan thing where you grab someone's pants
- Lon Suder

Better?

I'm a people person... who drinks