Persilot (acolyte)
10/09/06 06:54 PM
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Re: Didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poe
[re: Persilot]
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Love came slowly, made me blind, It grew within my darkened mind, Till of her dreamt I all the time. A fateful chance a deadly sign.
I played an empty lonely game, Of stolen glances, secret pain Till on that day my heart was shamed, And tears fell from my eyes like rain.
She'll never know how long I dreamt, Her skin, her hair, her lips, her scent But now my hope is gone and spent, These words shall be my sad lament.
"Well I'm a common working man, with a half of bitter, bread and jam and if it pleases me I'll put one on you man... when the copper fades away."
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Froggy Starlust (acolyte)
10/09/06 07:11 PM
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Re: Didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poe
[re: Persilot]
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Now we got a number one:
She burnt me like a candle, And I can't take this pain, This scolding writhing agony, This empty souless shame.
I just wanna feel Real love feel the home that I live in Cos I got too much life Running through my veins Going to waste
Now I'm burned and ruined, Consumed by hungry flame, My heart is turned to ashes, My life is not the same.
I just wanna feel Real love feel the home that I live in Cos I got too much life Running through my veins Going to waste
I know I cannot fight this fire, That never was my aim, But I'd rather burn forever, Then never hear her name.
I just wanna feel Real love feel the home that I live in Cos I got too much life Running through my veins Going to waste
Sex between a man and a woman can be absolutely wonderful, provided you get between the right man and the right woman.
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Persilot (acolyte)
10/11/06 06:18 PM
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Oh why won't you love me? Just why can't you see? I know I'm not perfect, But please set me free.
If only you'd love me, I'd give you the key, To my oldest of secrets, My darkest of dreams.
If only you'd see me, I'd stare deep in your eyes, I could fall in your beauty, For miles upon miles.
So I'd love you to tell me, Won't you make up your mind? Won't you say if you love me? Won't you give me a sign?
"Well I'm a common working man, with a half of bitter, bread and jam and if it pleases me I'll put one on you man... when the copper fades away."
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Froggy Starlust (acolyte)
10/11/06 06:26 PM
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But most importantly, does she have big tits?
Salad Insane V2
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Persilot (acolyte)
10/15/06 03:12 PM
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Sunday (The completely non-Bowie related version)
Sunday. Is like waiting at a bus stop, In a cheap blue raincoat, Wanting to be somewhere else.
Sunday. Is like an empty pint glass, When you stare through the gloopy remnant, And realise that it's finished.
Sunday Is constant cups of tea, Ink stained fingers And tired eyes.
Sunday, Is worrying about tomorrow, Not living for today, And wishing for something different.
"Well I'm a common working man, with a half of bitter, bread and jam and if it pleases me I'll put one on you man... when the copper fades away."
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diamondogz74 (freecloud)
10/15/06 03:36 PM
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Rather nice, thanks Persilot.
Do you like this one by...
Poetry of Wallace Stevens
Sunday Morning
I
Complacencies of the peignoir, and late Coffee and oranges in a sunny chair, And the green freedom of a cockatoo Upon a rug mingle to dissipate The holy hush of ancient sacrifice. She dreams a little, and she feels the dark Encroachment of that old catastrophe, As a calm darkens among water-lights. The pungent oranges and bright, green wings Seem things in some procession of the dead, Winding across wide water, without sound. The day is like wide water, without sound, Stilled for the passing of her dreaming feet Over the seas, to silent Palestine, Dominion of the blood and sepulchre.
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Why should she give her bounty to the dead? What is divinity if it can come Only in silent shadows and in dreams? Shall she not find in comforts of the sun, In pungent fruit and bright, green wings, or else In any balm or beauty of the earth, Things to be cherished like the thought of heaven? Divinity must live within herself: Passions of rain, or moods in falling snow; Grievings in loneliness, or unsubdued Elations when the forest blooms; gusty Emotions on wet roads on autumn nights; All pleasures and all pains, remembering The bough of summer and the winter branch. These are the measures destined for her soul.
III
Jove in the clouds had his inhuman birth. No mother suckled him, no sweet land gave Large-mannered motions to his mythy mind. He moved among us, as a muttering king, Magnificent, would move among his hinds, Until our blood, commingling, virginal, With heaven, brought such requital to desire The very hinds discerned it, in a star. Shall our blood fail? Or shall it come to be The blood of paradise? And shall the earth Seem all of paradise that we shall know? The sky will be much friendlier then than now, A part of labor and a part of pain, And next in glory to enduring love, Not this dividing and indifferent blue.
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She says, "I am content when wakened birds, Before they fly, test the reality Of misty fields, by their sweet questionings; But when the birds are gone, and their warm fields Return no more, where, then, is paradise?" There is not any haunt of prophesy, Nor any old chimera of the grave, Neither the golden underground, nor isle Melodious, where spirits gat them home, Nor visionary south, nor cloudy palm Remote on heaven's hill, that has endured As April's green endures; or will endure Like her remembrance of awakened birds, Or her desire for June and evening, tipped By the consummation of the swallow's wings.
V
She says, "But in contentment I still feel The need of some imperishable bliss." Death is the mother of beauty; hence from her, Alone, shall come fulfilment to our dreams And our desires. Although she strews the leaves Of sure obliteration on our paths, The path sick sorrow took, the many paths Where triumph rang its brassy phrase, or love Whispered a little out of tenderness, She makes the willow shiver in the sun For maidens who were wont to sit and gaze Upon the grass, relinquished to their feet. She causes boys to pile new plums and pears On disregarded plate. The maidens taste And stray impassioned in the littering leaves.
VI
Is there no change of death in paradise? Does ripe fruit never fall? Or do the boughs Hang always heavy in that perfect sky, Unchanging, yet so like our perishing earth, With rivers like our own that seek for seas They never find, the same receding shores That never touch with inarticulate pang? Why set the pear upon those river banks Or spice the shores with odors of the plum? Alas, that they should wear our colors there, The silken weavings of our afternoons, And pick the strings of our insipid lutes! Death is the mother of beauty, mystical, Within whose burning bosom we devise Our earthly mothers waiting, sleeplessly.
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Supple and turbulent, a ring of men Shall chant in orgy on a summer morn Their boisterous devotion to the sun, Not as a god, but as a god might be, Naked among them, like a savage source. Their chant shall be a chant of paradise, Out of their blood, returning to the sky; And in their chant shall enter, voice by voice, The windy lake wherein their lord delights, The trees, like serafin, and echoing hills, That choir among themselves long afterward. They shall know well the heavenly fellowship Of men that perish and of summer morn. And whence they came and whither they shall go The dew upon their feet shall manifest.
VIII
She hears, upon that water without sound, A voice that cries, "The tomb in Palestine Is not the porch of spirits lingering. It is the grave of Jesus, where he lay." We live in an old chaos of the sun, Or old dependency of day and night, Or island solitude, unsponsored, free, Of that wide water, inescapable. Deer walk upon our mountains, and the quail Whistle about us their spontaneous cries; Sweet berries ripen in the wilderness; And, in the isolation of the sky, At evening, casual flocks of pigeons make Ambiguous undulations as they sink, Downward to darkness, on extended wings.
London Bye Ta-Ta...
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Persilot (acolyte)
10/18/06 04:18 PM
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I heard the lonely crash of bitter waves, On empty moonlit shores, They ground the cruelly jagged rocks, And mourned the passage of the days.
I saw the empty rotten timbers, Rising riblike from the wistful dunes, Defiant to the shattered end, A slimey wreck, a pale moon.
I smelt the tears of love forgotten, The salty brine of sorrow, I wept for all the times now lost, A longing empty helplessness.
I turned away from darkened shore, The echo of the ghostly wind, Yet still it haunts me in my dreams, That shadowed coast of bleak despair.
"Well I'm a common working man, with a half of bitter, bread and jam and if it pleases me I'll put one on you man... when the copper fades away."
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Atonalexpress (acolyte)
10/19/06 02:35 AM
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I liked that one.
It's mostly all in the void, everything that you are, everything that you say, everything that you think.
It's mostly all been told, everything that you believe, everything that you heard, everything that you considered.
You don’t know who you are, therefore, you can’t tell someone what to believe, what to think, or what to say.
You don’t know where you’ve been, therefore, you can’t give directions on, how to save one’s soul, how to live one’s life, or how to communicate one’s mistakes.
Be nothing in the void. ©2006 JAC
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Persilot (acolyte)
10/22/06 03:37 PM
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Re: Didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poe
[re: Persilot]
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"I feel the bleak despair of empty hours, The ticking of this broken clock, Will someone please come restart my heart, And save me from this blackened rot?"
"You're the one who makes me live, For you I'll rise above it all, Only you can understand, The secret workings of my heart."
"I sink into the murky mire, Without your love I'm doomed, I'll not forget your joy filled eyes, Farewell my love that never was."
"Well I'm a common working man, with a half of bitter, bread and jam and if it pleases me I'll put one on you man... when the copper fades away."
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JarethsGirl (stardust savant)
10/23/06 08:34 AM
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This one sucked so bad I had to put a hidden Bowie lyric in it. It's probably the only part I like, too.
I am waiting in a sea of black Dip your toe in, watch the shadows attack
Let your feet anchor into the sand, let it engulf, as you reach out your hand
Find my cool fingertips through the dark Don't be afraid, though the water is stark
Swim out to me in the rippling waves, though the undertoe may provide us our graves
Hold my hand as we drift out to sea In pendulous uncertainty, get lost with me
The whispers of warning on the misty air, will pull and pry and try to dispair
When the sea does churn and night sky flash with lightning bolts and thunder crash -
I will not let go nor swim to shore, for I love you forevermore
"Why didn't you post yesterday?" -- to_dizzy
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