JarethsGirl (acolyte)
09/13/08 06:51 AM
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I like it Strawie. Good to see you posting here again. 
This is about the only thing worthwhile I've written since last I was here.
Further than Two souls can ever be I am in the peaking morning light And, you are in the place no one can see
I’ll imagine it for you
The sun never burns your eyes No terror permeates the dark No tears need be cried In your glory, your freedom
Nobody’s going to hurt you anymore
Your traces will be swept up in a zephyr Of mystery and longing Sorrow and regret Silent fury But, the lines of your face will be kept In the most hallowed memories Campfire lit Pyretic flurry
Finally, raised up in flames
Yearning palms will well remember Those hard wood-chopping hands That buried themselves in burnt sienna fur And pined to plant themselves in distant lands
The horizon always was your home Sought from early dawn into the night Broad and bright, I see your easy smile Sprawling in the peaking morning light
If I make my bed in hell, behold, thou art there.
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Persilot (acolyte)
09/13/08 09:14 AM
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Oh my lovely poetry... I thought you dead and buried, But now I find you here again, Decayed and somewhat smelly.
Like a Nun on the Run, I'm terrible fun.
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Diamond Frog (acolyte)
09/17/08 06:42 PM
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With a clever smile And a clean anus You took me for a ride On a purple platypus While weird lover Wilde Rode home on a bus
Satie's Faction
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JarethsGirl (acolyte)
01/17/09 02:56 PM
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I really don't like doing this "dot dot dot" thing, but this works so much better with the indentations. Thinking of adding another stanza to square things off...
A Royal Welcome
Have I indulged unseemly ................In feasts of blushing terror? ................................Apples shining on the cheeks of ................Abdicated dignity For, here in my confinement ................There is no sash to tear ................................No grappling with the robed façade ................Nor powdering of hair
A fool, I’ve trebled troubles ................For want of trophied shoulders ................................Not mantling a violet heart ................Nor, violent flowers of fervor But, damascened refinement ................A silent, silken weave ................................No burden of simplicity ................Upon the sterling sleeve
Do diamonds rain from tear ducts? ................Do roses reign the core? ................................Is Venus deigned the precious pearl ................Of adoration’s smile? For, I have never mined them ................Nor, boasted their décor ................................Nor, do they shower upon the shroud ................Of death’s unlittered shore
Fairy stories in the penny arcade. You bought my love and I paid.
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Diamond Frog (acolyte)
01/18/09 07:57 AM
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A tad old-fashioned, but very well written. You're pretty articulate for a fatty.
When Bowie Meets Satie
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JarethsGirl (acolyte)
01/18/09 12:28 PM
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Well, ya know, we have to learn twelve different words for each kind of food so we don't seem excessive. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go make a Dagwood.
Fairy stories in the penny arcade. You bought my love and I paid.
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Diamond Frog (acolyte)
01/18/09 01:20 PM
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You mean a sous-marin?
When Bowie Meets Satie
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JarethsGirl (acolyte)
01/18/09 01:59 PM
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Otherwise known as a hero.
Fairy stories in the penny arcade. You bought my love and I paid.
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Persilot (acolyte)
11/05/09 04:15 PM
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When you are far from here, The gears and cogs that make me tick, Whir that bit slower, Grind to a halt and lock, In patterns of behaviour, And modes of thinking, Like a clockwork soldier, That lumbers on, With missing parts,
You are my heart.
So bring back your key, To wind me tight, I'm more than metal gears, But less than perfect, Without you.
Like a Nun on the Run, I'm terrible fun.
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Persilot (acolyte)
11/05/09 04:16 PM
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(Meadowell is a shitty metro station that I have to wait at each morning as I go to work, it inspired this insipid effort.)
Meadowell
Smoking woman by the metro rails, Can you even think or feel? Or are you drowning out some pain, That scarred your soul, But left no shame?
Your child looks on with curious eyes, As you scream obscenties to the slate grey skies, The platform drips with fallen spit, No seats remain, On which to sit.
At night the shrieks and whoops, Of mispent youth will echo, Down the puke strewn tunnel, And yellow railings will hide, Those old familiar lies.
I watched detached, Sad at my own contempt, This weary Heaven and stranger Hell On this dreary day, In Meadowell...
Like a Nun on the Run, I'm terrible fun.
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