OK, now how the hell are Brian's parents going to feel when they come up to call their precious son down to his favorite breakfast of pancakes & waffles......
And how will Brian's mother ever get all the blood out of the carpet......

I absolutely love your story, twister!!!
With the exception of Ch. 14, although I understand why it was needed....
You are very talented, twister, and I hope to see your name in print someday!!!

I'll change my signature when I think of something new.....