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I'm not whining. I'm relaxed enough, making observations. It's impossible to improve upon my poetry, given I'm satisfied with it.

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Please please please stop trying to sound all smart and scholarly. It's killing me...it just makes you sound stupider and stupider. If you want to "fit in" in these forums or whatever the hell you're trying to do, I suggest loosening your ass. People really like to associate with others that will show emotions and laugh with them and generally jump into the crowd to have fun. However, you're trying to be all untouchable so...if your goal is to try and make friends here, that's not exactly the best method.

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