Thank you kindly, Sam. I was rather happy with the "scales" line, which happened to echo the "bird" line in the previous verse quite by accident. (By the way, if I were to ever read that poem aloud somewhere, I would raise my fist in the air at "weapon" and give the middle finger at the "bird" word, and throughout the rest of the poem.)
P.S. I don't think Cohen would mind. He'd probably take it as the greatest of compliments (secretly.. and then sue you for every sweet sheckel you are worth! Hahaha ::sigh:: ..Jews.)
"Roulette Weal"
Tonight seems like the perfect night To quit while I'm ahead But, I'm not ready
Though, I wouldn't say I'm winning;
I'm on fire
If I thought I could I'd stop the globe from spinning; Dive my finger in that shallow, Muted blue If, but, to prove I'm not on fire
Under pressure It won't budge To split this glacier I'll need warmth There was no sun to melt the plastic Only artificial light Only the pallor of my face
They make it out to be a game As if you're choosing where to land Without having to make a choice But, when you're losing It is still your fault
And, everyone just drifts away; Dissappointed Uninvested In their own desires, tumbling From your palm To fall in all the wrong pockets
They ought to paint the continents All red The lifeless sea All black And, God is green
The one color we cannot see Nothing could make more sense than that
I wouldn't play this game If everything Were blurs of faint, grey hues And, getting used Were not my main intention Is it making sense, yet?
There's a light In every shade
For, red does cast a roseate, bright sheen upon my face
But, black does then reflect my visage Deep within the void Caliginous And, underjoyed
When the glow of luck has simply Lost my touch
And, I can see the loss, as such
If guns are made for shooting, then skulls are made to crack. You’ve never seen a better Faig than with a bullet in his back.
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